Days keep coming back like waves on my feet.
I can save nothing from the foam of the sea.
I’m adrift in an ocean of shipwrecked keels;
and there’s nothing I can salvage from their treasuries.
No part of the sunset that appeals to me.
All of it merges in my memories;
There’s only brown born from all the reds and greens.
Only, I drowned from swimming in the sea.
(A/N: It’s been a while since I wrote poetry that rhymed (many months to be frank) and I was nervous about posting this at all so please tell me if I should try this again!)
This is so nice
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Thanks Hardik, glad you liked it :’)
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I like this. It speaks to me. so carry on rhyming and carry on just writing.
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Thank you, that really means something! :’) I look forward to posting the next one, then. ^_^
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Hi! I just saw that you followed me, thank you!. I went right to your blog and it’s funny, we both posted similar poems at the same time. And, lovely writing 🙂
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Thank you so much! I just saw your poem, it’s so good. ^_^ And yeah, strange coincidences, no? :’)
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Ha! Yes, very strange… we’re riding the same wave 🙂
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Indeed 😀
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I enjoyed it. Don’t be nervous to share your work. I just wrote a poem last month after 3 years. It felt good. Im trying to get back into free verse poetry. I consider myself a mediocre poet, but seeing how open my fellow bloggers are with their writing motivated me to do the same with mine. Keep at it!
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Thank you! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. I agree that writing poetry feels good, and your support lends me all the motivation I need to post it! Thank you so much.
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Lovely work, Maitreyi! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Dina. :’)
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This is amazing…please, write whatever your heart urges….you can write no wrong 🙂 Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Very nice efforts, practise makes perfect. Don’t be afraid, you won’t be doing it all.
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Thank you so much! ^_^
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I really loved this poem! Thanks for sharing. I love a good rhyme and the poem on my poetry blog here on WordPress is about rhyming in case you have time to look? Have a rhythmical weekend, Sam 🙂
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Thanks for visiting my blog, I’ll be sure to come over to yours as well!
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Thank you Matireyi 🙂
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That was really mature, Maitreyi. Loved it.
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